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Lost Cause by *IceVallejo:iconIceVallejo:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


For how long should you keep crying?

Till the day you die… or until some knight in shining armor arrives to save you?

I’m sorry… your relentless cringe heard almost everyday whining for the same reasons dragged for years and years of bad decisions of covering deadly  wounds with band aids is always leaking some blood it’s worthless…

For some reason what you show off like life experience and adulthood wisdom is covered in ages of crying over the same problems that exist and grew up with me since the day of my birth…

Struggling as a small ant against the cruel wind, I also lived under the shadow of the wrong doing of these troubles and the aftershocks lived by you also made me grew stronger and cunning of how to avoid these things before they mess up with me…

Unfortunately that’s just me…

I’m still young and at certain degree unable to fully understand the meaning of your tears, but all my life experience taught me that nothing in life is pink unless we really try to get the best things out of it…

And you know it's true...

Living under the poison of parental troubles, bad economy and rushed decisions made me grow like the type of person who will never fret about these things happening again…

Armed with my little experience achieved through the storm and the vastest common sense and emotional candor that your boundless heart and intelligence inherited me that does not need lifelong explanations to understand that every negative action has a negative reaction that will haunt you later…

And no matter how much you whine and cry, it will never go away unless you take the proper action…

That’s why today I grew up strong and reckless about protecting you from these demons…

But before I thought I could understand everything, I regain consciousness and realize that no matter how small your problems are, I can’t take them away…

You won’t let me, you won’t listen, you won’t stop and you'll never tell me why…

Such lost cause makes me sad and angry because I can’t understand why you must keep living in the void by own hand when I believe that easily following me through the dark path would at least keep you company…

And maybe, just maybe, help you find a way out...

Am I that wrong that you can’t follow me or are you so deep that you’ll never get out?

…Mother?
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Sorry for the long text, but my heart needs to shout...

Need to sleep after this... I doubt I can...

But, just before I do so: there's many people out there like this... some of my loved ones and also some friends are crawling in the dark relentlessly hoping that someone will ever take them out while rejecting all help...

While for me you're not lost causes (cause I love you and I'm never giving up)... you're pretty much alone until you realize that sometimes we need to listen instead of locking ourselves out...

At least I'll always try to help, even if I'm not the answer at all, I don't need to be... because those answers can only be figured out by yourselves...

Your lifelong experience means nothing when going all over through the wrong way, get over it, nobody ever lost the game for stopping for a while and listening or asking for help.

Specially from your loved ones...

So, don't try to reject me, because I'll never get away...

That's what love is really about...

Or I'm really stubborn idiot and also...

A lost cause...


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Reflection © Hernando R. Vallejo / 16-APR-2008
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*Aiarashi:iconAiarashi: Apr 23, 2008, 6:36:30 PM
Profundo. Me gustó.

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*IceVallejo:iconIceVallejo: Apr 24, 2008, 5:18:55 AM
Gracias. :manhug:

Cuando estoy al filo de la espada se me ocurren estas cosas... tengo que empezar a escribir algo un poco más alegre. :lmao:

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Sometimes I think I understand everything, then... I regain consciousness.
*Aiarashi:iconAiarashi: Apr 24, 2008, 9:23:53 AM
Sí, tal vez. xP

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*IceVallejo:iconIceVallejo: Apr 24, 2008, 11:48:26 AM
Bueno, cada vez me acerco mas al estereotipo Emo que queres en la foto. :lmao:

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Sometimes I think I understand everything, then... I regain consciousness.
*Aiarashi:iconAiarashi: Apr 24, 2008, 12:25:03 PM
Jajaja, eso es bueno. xDDDDD

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*IceVallejo:iconIceVallejo: Apr 24, 2008, 1:01:48 PM
Tal vez si, tal vez no... :XD: :rofl:

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Sometimes I think I understand everything, then... I regain consciousness.
~Ynahra:iconYnahra: May 10, 2008, 10:46:36 PM
WOOOOOOOOOOW Nando! es profundo pero parece tan sincero y honesto! te quedo muy bien!

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*IceVallejo:iconIceVallejo: May 11, 2008, 10:01:59 PM
Es más que sincero y honesto Dulce, creeme.

Gracias por leerlo. :hug:

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Sometimes I think I understand everything, then... I regain consciousness.
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