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Sentimental Fool by *IceVallejo:iconIceVallejo:

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For how long do we have to stay mute in the dark?

Sentimentalism pops up from whatever corner of my head it’s as soon as I start listening romantic music and start to sing out minutes away before breaking into a helpless cringe…

Phrases in wide range of tender feelings catch everyone’s ears and pierce most hearts into submission of the platonic tenderness that invades your body on the desire of feeling the arms of your loved one around you so you can let it all out…

Too bad that this kind of situation often happens when someone lonely is in a roomful of couples and wannabe lovers who can’t keep a decent distance to dissimulate their interest but rather have contact and be the obvious ones in the room…

What is love about?

No matter how much I give about myself and how bitter I get when defending what I want in store for my integrity, nobody is forced to love and the sad truth is that many ones will find themselves in unfair situations were your interest is banned from your loved one’s existence…

Many of us do have some experience, but such bad record of failures stacking one after another before really finding something you believe perfect is cancelled by someone else who you believe does not deserve the precious minutes I could give her showering her in my feelings…

Like God giving meat to a toothless person, you feel that there’s no other way around but to continue your life and learn from past mistakes.

Once again, a sentimental fool…

Like me starts to dream about what I thought it was mine from the beginning, and bumping with rocks on the long path of accepted defeat while loosing all of your teeth whenever you hit the floor, it’s to make you understand that not everything can be achieved in life…

Some time must pass and some events have to occur in order the get sun and moon in the same line a hope for a miracle that will fulfill my horny wishes of giving such a reckless and unmeasured amounts of affection and try to use them in the best manners to make my loved one happy for the rest of our lives…

While many ones don’t believe in love and other really try to fool themselves out of it just because they had a bad experience before that left burning scars that won’t heal with time and care even by their current subjects of that bastard feeling called attraction that leaves us bound to somebody…

That leaves us apart…

Sentimental fools whose love will never be completely understood nor satisfied because we want to give more and more even if we know we will never get the same in return; people get afraid of us and leave without trying, not knowing that we don’t care if you can’t give that much, it’s always up to you (and we know you're not forced to love in the same way), therefor we live by that rule even if it hurts.

But no matter how indifferent the situation is, at the end, we love too and we’re really rooting for somebody to get all our care.

Believe me...

I'll give it all, for someone who's really interested about finding what true love is.
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Just another reflection of love I came up with a lonely night.

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Reflection © Hernando R. Vallejo / 16-APR-2008
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*Aiarashi:iconAiarashi: Apr 16, 2008, 9:27:34 AM
Amor es darlo todo sin pedir ni esperar. :heart:

Bonito poema. :nod:

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=taintedsoul87:icontaintedsoul87: Apr 16, 2008, 10:27:01 AM
ay no nando, sometimes ur words are rly rly sad :(

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''Whoever said money can't buy happiness, didn't know where to shop''//Blair Waldorf
*IceVallejo:iconIceVallejo: Apr 16, 2008, 11:55:06 AM
Yeah, sometimes I go kinda emo. :lmao:

Anyways, I wrote this after a party... Karaoke and drinks had me dizzy (but not wasted enough to not write), I uploaded it until today and added the last line.

After singing pure romantic songs and ballads and having a few shots, I realized most single guys were also gathering around me, shoulder by shoulder moving at the rhythm of my singing and then singing too... they're also good guys... it got me quite sad.

So... I guess that's why I'm writing these things.

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Sometimes I think I understand everything, then... I regain consciousness.
*IceVallejo:iconIceVallejo: Apr 16, 2008, 11:55:59 AM
Exactamente amigo.

Gracias por el :+fav:. :manhug:

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Sometimes I think I understand everything, then... I regain consciousness.
~RockValley:iconRockValley: Apr 16, 2008, 4:13:16 PM
"fulfill my horny wishes" aplaudo tu honestidad =P

Some grammar errors creo que vi por ahi pero all in all its good, seria bueno tener una platica con vos acerca de esto, para que mires el punto de vista de la psicologia o al menos como he usado la psicologia para definir este tema tan voluble y evolutivo.

Good writing, refreshing read :thumbsup:

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El que piensa vive una comedia, el que siente vive una tragedia.
*IceVallejo:iconIceVallejo: Apr 16, 2008, 9:49:46 PM
Jaja, gracias. :lmao:

I was kinda drunk... so there might be slip ups here and there. Nunca he hablado con una psicologa al respecto, pero sería interesante ver que tanto se podría extender.

Thanks for the comment!! :horns:

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Sometimes I think I understand everything, then... I regain consciousness.
~A-yuhIeiri:iconA-yuhIeiri: Apr 16, 2008, 9:53:34 PM
"nobody is forced to love and the sad truth is that many ones will find themselves in unfair situations were your interest is banned from your loved one’s existence…" so poetic *-*


I really,really liked it........congrats!

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\"I´m not ideal,I\'m quite absurd.I\'m just an imperfect girl.I rise above this perfect world\"
*IceVallejo:iconIceVallejo: Apr 16, 2008, 10:26:24 PM
I'm glad you liked it, Yuri... thanks for reading. :hug:

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Sometimes I think I understand everything, then... I regain consciousness.
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